Wednesday, March 12, 2008

55 words - What is love? v. 1

What is love?

What is love? Eve finds herself wondering as she sat in the waiting room.

When Jen comes out, donned in a crimson satin dress, Eve finds herself unable to breathe – finds it hard to. Her chest constricts and fumbled into knots.

“How does it look?”

She finds her answer to what love is.

“G-Great.” Beautiful.

Tuesday, March 11, 2008

What I needed to say v. 2 - final

Open the Door

It was a pretty
-- sunny --
June afternoon

I remember the sun’s ultraviolet rays
Enveloping my body when I walked out

I remember clearly
Though I’m not sure you would

I wanted to do something that day
When you fell
Would you have remembered?

When you tripped
When you suddenly lost your balance
When your head flew backwards
And hit the concrete ground --

All I could do was watch
All I could do was stare

I wanted to reach out…
Reach out and pull you right up

But all I did was nothing

I remember when you used to lift me right up
Next to the candy cabinet
And give me sweets and treats

Now all of that is gone
Your hugs – frail but firm
Your kisses – planted on my pink, blushing cheeks
Your voice – it’s been so long

So long that I’ve forgotten
Is that horrible?

But if I had --
If only I had reached out
And held that door open for you

Maybe you would be here

Next to me
Smiling

And telling me how much I’ve grown

I’m sorry I didn’t open that door for you

Tuesday, March 4, 2008

A Time My World Changed v. 3

I Can See Again

my vision is blurred

colors blend together

stuck together

opaque, unclear

i trip

i fall --

every movement

jumps

blinks

flinches


my vision is clouded

black becomes brown

green becomes yellow

thin, black lines on paper

appear blank…

blank…

blank…

white..

.

.

.

.

someone notices

my trips, my falls, my clumsiness

holds out hand

grasps it tight

and pulls me up


I can see again.
It is clear.
No longer does my paper appear blank.
Rather, precise lines are interwoven on the paper.
There are a million different shades.
Thousands of the same color.

Color.

I can define it.
I can touch it.
I can feel it.
It reaches out and I…
I…

I can see.

Edit: I've changed the second to last full stanza.